Good work.
Well as I am listing to it now, the intro neds a stronger base beat. I am not a fan of it being overbearing butit so weak you can bearely hear the drusms, the general feeling for the cridits is defently there and it brings back memmorys.
what i want to see as improvement?
Stronger drums, and enhacve the feeling of the beat it self. so you cna close oyur eyes and really "nod" your head to the beat of the song.
Other than that, I see fw few problems with it, its clean, well cut and not sketchey or anything. I think you ceck I think is the right word? I notice as I am lisning the only noticeable base beat in the backround it clicks lightly and you can hear it strugging to be heard over the rest of the song.
Make the forntals a little less loud and lower the drums a tad so they don't blow they way they are now.